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    Gerbera Daisies

    Hello - first post to this group. I've been having an argument with myself and can't decide if this piece is done, or needs something more. Part of me thinks there should be maybe a little more going on with the green stems, but I don't want the background to detract from the flowers. Any and all suggestions welcome!
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    I think the problem is the way you've outlines the yellow flowers. The white ones look tons better. The background stems and leaves, along with the yellow flowers, need to have similar gradations too to make harmonious whole.

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    nice painting

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