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    Stockholm, Södermälarstrand

    The subject is one of Stockholms most iconic city silhouettes. The Laurinska Palace.
    What do you think, good or bad, feedback?
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    I like it a lot, although I am not wildy enthusiastic about the red-brownish walls. The perspective of the leftmost boat is off, and the construction of the other one needs work...
    Grinnikend door het leven...

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    This is better as the blue on the roofs mirrors the sky. But again, the blue needs to be reflected on the buildings - it doesn't have to be in your face, and could be subtle. For a well inhabited place, there are no people out and about other than one lonely dog walker. Tress could be simpler too. Keep going as I think you're nearly there.

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    Thank you Eezacque and Black spot. You both have relevant good points. I'll revise the painting.

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