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    Character concept

    Hi, my first post here.
    Ok this is my attempt to approach the world of W40k in a stylyzed style, Still W.I.P
    but i need your crits and advices.
    Thanks guys.Name:  Comandante-Angelo2.jpg
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    I dig it. The shadows on the shoulder armor trim seem awfully long and not quite in the right direction.

    Perhaps add some battle damage? I mean this is a space marine!

    The head could be moved to the left. For some reason it looks a little off centered.

    If the cape is flapping that far sideways wouldn't the loin cloth be as well?


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    Looks pretty amazing for a stylized take on the subject! as far as advice goes. Maybe add in more little details in the solid color spaces? Just Unless you want to stay with a more "disney" like look.

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