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    Evil Icecream Truck Driver

    Character design for a villain that so happens to be an ice cream truck driver.
    Comments and critique welcome.

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    The title says evil but the views don't convey that.

    Though that top image, right one.. the hand seems awkward holding a cone.. and the whole cone doesn't look right in terms of depth and ice cream stacking
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    yeah he doesn't seem that evil
    check out this movie.

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    Thanks. It was actually an assignment for class where I had to make him look like a hero but actually a villain so he ended up really round - more like a villain in a kid's cartoon instead. I will try and fix the ice cream cone!

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShianeSalabie View Post
    Thanks. It was actually an assignment for class where I had to make him look like a hero but actually a villain so he ended up really round - more like a villain in a kid's cartoon instead. I will try and fix the ice cream cone!
    Yeah, i see your point there. I think your art really conveyed what the assignment is looking for.

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    Not bad at all!
    He looks more like a really mean person rather than an evil one, but If you were aiming at children show's stylistics, I think it is fine.
    The expressions don't really suit him though. He doesn't even look mean on them.

    The main issue I would have are his arms and that ice cream cone. Modi already mentioned what's wrong with the cone, so no need for me to go into details.
    With arms though, hands seem to be off quite a bit. Try working on them and studying more. You got really awesome hand reference - your own hands. Try using them, taking photos in the mirror and so on and so for.

    Also, his legs are not selling me the balance of the character. He looks like he is about to fall.
    I think that the main reason for that is the angle on which his legs are tilted. Either tilt them a bit more to the left, or just rotate the whole character so he looks more like he's standing straight.

    By the way, is that from Stephen Silver's class?
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