Art: Random Character Design

Join the #1 Art Workshop - LevelUpJoin Premium Art Workshop
Results 1 to 4 of 4
  1. #1
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    ATL
    Posts
    495
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    Random Character Design

    Random Character Design

    All advice, crits, everything welcome! Please... crit it hard, I need to get better. One thing that bothers me about it at least that I might go back and change is the evenness between the folds- too regular. Also the cloth needs a better light source.


    Been a long time since I've done something like this...

    thx for looking!


    ~chasing whims is not always a waste of time~

    sketchjunk thread give me a MOO!!!–CATLsketchgroup

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Posts
    823
    Thanks
    38
    Thanked 39 Times in 32 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Haven't seen you here for a while
    Nice piece, definitely a cool feel to it.
    Things that stick out to me; utter absence of hands, that could make it so much more interesting. Left shoulder seems to be out a bit too far. Laslty, folds on the fabric look a bit artificial, they are quite rigid and are in a repating pattern. Otherwise - great job.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  4. #3
    Join Date
    Apr 2004
    Location
    Canada
    Posts
    800
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Looks kewl to me. Sorry, I can't really critique tho, I'm still a noob.

    Sanby

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  5. #4
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    ATL
    Posts
    495
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Yutani: yeh i've been pretty blasted busy lately... =( sad...
    Hmmm thx for the crit- tweaked the fabric a tiny bit but I don't think I'll do too much more- hopefully I can improve on fabric work by the next piece =P I agree on the hands... but I got lazy by that point- I wanted to colorrrr!!! =P
    thx much

    Sanby: well thanks for the comment/compliment anyways!

    Ok here's the tweaked version:
    Random Character Design
    Slight change only... not enough to save the whole thing =P


    ~chasing whims is not always a waste of time~

    sketchjunk thread give me a MOO!!!–CATLsketchgroup

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

Members who have read this thread: 0

There are no members to list at the moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
  • 424,149 Artists
  • 3,599,276 Artist Posts
  • 32,941 Sketchbooks
  • 54 New Art Jobs
Art Workshop Discount Inside
Register

Developed Actively by vBSocial.com
The Art Department
SpringOfSea's Sketchbook