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October 30th, 2004 #1
Random Character Design
All advice, crits, everything welcome! Please... crit it hard, I need to get better. One thing that bothers me about it at least that I might go back and change is the evenness between the folds- too regular. Also the cloth needs a better light source.
Been a long time since I've done something like this...
thx for looking!
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Nice piece, definitely a cool feel to it.
Things that stick out to me; utter absence of hands, that could make it so much more interesting. Left shoulder seems to be out a bit too far. Laslty, folds on the fabric look a bit artificial, they are quite rigid and are in a repating pattern. Otherwise - great job.
October 30th, 2004 #3
October 30th, 2004 #4
Yutani: yeh i've been pretty blasted busy lately... =( sad...
Hmmm thx for the crit- tweaked the fabric a tiny bit but I don't think I'll do too much more- hopefully I can improve on fabric work by the next piece =P I agree on the hands... but I got lazy by that point- I wanted to colorrrr!!! =P
Sanby: well thanks for the comment/compliment anyways!
Ok here's the tweaked version:
Slight change only... not enough to save the whole thing =P