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    Girl and Unicorn -Feedback Appreciated!

    Yo guys!

    Long time since I posted, hoping to get some feedback, redlines, whatever on this piece I'm working on. Thanks for your help!

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    I dig this quite a bit. What was this done in?

    A few things that stood out to me.. The hair on the far side of the horn has a bit of tracking issue where it came from. I would almost have just left a strong silhouette of the head - sans front bangs - and called it good.

    The head seems a bit disembodied. Not a deal breaker, but a little odd.

    Lighting seems wonky. Some deep shadows by the arms, less elsewhere.. etc.
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    First of all, awesome piece, I really like the rendering here. The thing that really stand out to me at the moment is the horse, the values and lighting don't align with the girl. With a scene like this I recommend making a quick mock up in 3d, Like Fredrick Leighton use to do with his miniatures, to get the lighting right. Here is an example of a 3d model you can use as reference https://3dwarehouse.sketchup.com/mod...ee-description I recommend importing it into 3ds max, or blender if you don't have it, and maybe changing the textures.

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    Thanks for the feedback guys!

    I haven't had a lot of time to work on this but I want to keep kludging on. Has there been improvement? what else should I finish/change before I call it done?

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    That orange flower is getting lost in the hair... may want to look at that.
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