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    Smile Humorous farm scene

    Hello, this image depicts farm animals completing the normal tasks that humans would usually oversee on a farm.
    I'd like to get some feedback on sizing and perspective, color, and line work.
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    ... am I missing something, or is the image not attached?
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    sorry about that, lets see if it posts now.
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    There it is. Not bad.. A good bit of ground work done, but could be tuned up.

    The first thing I noticed - nothing gives a shadow. The characters, tools, etc.

    Next - the shovel handle is not in the hands of Pig.

    Lastly - the hay pile seems weird when there's no hay near it.

    Oh - and the sky is nice, but you can certainly add some clouds and what not to break it up.
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    thank you these are all good suggestions that will help me fix this up.

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    The push-reel mower needs work, the blades aren't in perspective with the handle it'd be more in profile.
    Consider making a path under or behind the horse character to show where the grass has been cut.

    As Modi123 pointed out the shovel isn't in their hand, but the digging posture of pig is really awkward. It looks like their arcing their back to push down the shovel, when most people use their foot to stamp down the blade.
    Not to be overtly nitpicky but what are they using a shovel for in the garden bed?

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    You've got some excellent points that I will definitely implement. Thank you

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