hahaha the sign on the first page says "sparth" yeh? are you a friend....or an admirer???
Your work is very professional and top notch. One thing that caught my eye was when the protagonist is shaving with the blade the 2 shots are of the same shot of him shaving, one is just zoomed in. Feels like your somehow cheating the reader by using a frame twice (your totally not, it just spoils the rhythm of it). Maybe a shot of him scraping one way, then a shot of him scraping back the other way would look smoother u know?
Great use of depth of field too in the action scenes.
Fantastic fantastic stuff.
Merci merci merci!!!