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    Great stuff dude, really like the last image!

    Looking for Feedback! Please visit my sketchbook..



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    Kambei Shimada: thanks for dropping by and the candies for me!!!

    A promising doodle i started for about 30 min.
    I will focus on rhythm and simplicity of the composition... kill me if i don´t finish this...

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    I'll remember your deathwish, if it isn't finished! Besides that there are a couple things you might want to look at. The ear, seems a tad bit off, the top part , seems to reach a bit far too high. And also watch for that alignment of the lips and nose, the lips seem to be a bit off, or that might be me. Besides that finissh it, it seems like it's going to be good.

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    @Evxyza92: I hope so! I corrected some of your critiques mentioned, the ear is hidden by her hair now. Thanks alot!!

    I am not really sure what this scene is about, i thought about a symbolic figure like "autumn"... currently it seems more like a fight seen but we will see it tomorrow...

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    Update!!! I finally found a scenery i am satisfied with, i struggle with her legs right now, you see. Perhabs i add a wolf by her side but we will see...

    Cause time is little the next few days for me, i set the deadline for next weekend for this one. Wish me luck!


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    Ok, after some various extension of the canvaz, i finally cropped it and simplified the scenery.

    Nothing original but that will come next...

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    alternative with sword....

    I guess i go back to bow... which makes just more sense in this scenery....

    Next update should include the finished piece

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    i like the sword better

    and i must say this is amazing.... watching the progress shots is so great, quite an amazing transformation

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    thanks a lot Joe, so i keep the sword for now...

    well, i almost got mad with her pose especially her feed... hope it works!
    Ok not finished but i see the goal already!

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    I think her pose is a tad of balance

    and it could be fixed by moving her right leg to her right just a tad more

    but otherwise the progression is very positive!!!

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    it's so crazy how much you change stuff as you go along...and all the while rendering :o

    do you ever work on getting a good [clean] line drawing, and then rendering everything out on top of that?

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    Some seriously great stuff going on here. I can't wait to see how that last one turns out.

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    Oh oh the deadline!!!

    Although i said that i finish the painting above I didn´t got it done.
    Nevertheless or better BUT i have another thing done this weekend.

    Sir Galahad - CHOW #142

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    I finally used some imitating "real" brushes, no ref...

    @Oranje Joe: thanks for take a look again! Already redone the pose...

    @Texahol: Well the craziest thing is that i actually know that my workflow is bullshit... I really have to try to work step by step ....

    @sourgasm: thank you too!! I hope to finish the painting in the next few days.. stay tuned!

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    Love your work in here, though on your last piece. My first glance made me believe it was a woman. Though when I looked clearly I saw more manly features. But still, it could be mistaken. Just a pointer, no critique I'm sorry to say.

    Work hard, anything is possible. I know, I know, it’s a very cheesy response but it’s true. Hard work and dedication is the key to reach your dreams. -Bjřrn Hurri

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    I've got the same comment as Hive minD, I'm afraid. Otherwise, sick rendering and lovely charas

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    Thanks for your words Hive_minD. A woman? Well Sir Galahad is described as "pure" and "immaculate", therefore I gave him some kind of beauty.
    So the little androgyny is intended.

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    Had some free time this evening.

    Focus on skin shading.... PS / no refs.

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    I really really have to learn how to draw hands.... damn it!!!

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    Sir Galahad is great!
    ...and the hands are coming too, i can see it
    cheers!

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    I like Sir Gallahad ( I thought she was a muscular woman) and the red hair warrior woman too... oh yeah, new here, just popping by say hello as well

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    it kinda looks like she is missing some hair on the lower part of her head

    but other than that its excellent! the eyes are so expressive!

    redheads

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    The eyes on that last one are just awesome.

    You should push the colors, though. It's looking a bit washed out right now. Great painting, though. Can't wait to see it finished.

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    I almost forgot about the last painting...

    Thanks everybody for their nice words.


    Ok here is something i started today, right now I need a break, cause i have such damn problems with the feet... have to some studies!

    Here we go

    No refs, but a more logical workflow by me!

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    great anatomy knowledge!! keep it on

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    Your really getting good at faces and skin, you could probably push the saturation abit more though

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    wow, design on the last piece is awesone! keep up good work!!!!

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    wow, sweet desings and stufff.....do some photostudies to improve you knowledge about light and colour! if you got time, read this:
    http://www.huevaluechroma.com/index.php

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    Really loving your sketchbook! I do not have any crits for you! Lol I really like your last update! Very nice!

    You're not in Hildesheim are you?? Google maps says that's over 4 hrs away!

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