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    Value/Anatomy Practice

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    Any advice is welcome.


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    yo ... the mistakes i've spotted so far are: missing belly button, serratus anterior, fossa between chest/ shoulders, fissa between traps/ sternocleidomastoid ... brachialis not defined for such a muscular body ... chest not properly attached to clavicle, obliques not defines ... keep up gonna take some time ...

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    Yeah I agree! My anatomy needs some work. I was more focused on the values on this one though, trying to perfect my values!

    Oh and what is fossa or fissa? o_O

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    Hmm... values wise - if that's what you're focussing on, I'd say that the lighting could definitely be improved. It's a little cliched at the moment and looks quite flat. Did you do this from reference or imagination?
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    I used a reference for the body but I tried to come up with my own lighting.

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