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    Hi everyone this is like my first post after looking at everyones amazing art for ages i have some photos 4 u tell me what u think of em (links to devart)

    glass
    http://www.deviantart.com/view/11224554/

    Cat Gypsy n pampas grass
    http://www.deviantart.com/view/11224682/

    Infinity pool (Bird Bath)
    http://www.deviantart.com/view/11224953/

    Tree Bones
    http://www.deviantart.com/view/11225089/

    Dartmoor Sunset Cave
    http://www.deviantart.com/view/11030449/
    My Sketchbook: http://conceptart.org/forums/showthr...57#post1396657
    Comments and feedback would be nice.
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    hey! welcome aboard, i'm quite new myself too.

    About the photos, I have some comments:

    first photo (glass stripes pattern)
    There isn't really a focus in the photo, I think you wanted to make a macro photo or something, but to me it seems nothing on that glass is really in focus. It's a really nice idea nonetheless!

    second photo (gypsy feather)
    haha, funny shot... everyone loves cats!

    third photo (bird bath)
    I don't know if it's the weird angle, but it looks as the horizon isn't level. You can fix this in photoshop of course. I love the shot though, if you could only level it... nice job!

    fourth photo (tree bones)
    Nice too, hard to focus on anything though... my eyes are like spinning around if I look really long at it.

    fifth photo (the sunset one)
    Nice find! I think this is the best one of the serie... only one complaint, and that is that you used your flash, which destroys the rocks a bit. If you could've used a tripod and a longer shutterspeed it would've been even better. Good job though!
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    I really like the tree bones. I like the way its hard to figure out what the perspective is. However, that might be a tad overdone. Overall, good work! I'm new here too.
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    Thx for the comments i think i need a new camera (flash automaticly turns on in dark places and i forget)
    My Sketchbook: http://conceptart.org/forums/showthr...57#post1396657
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