Great Greens! I don't know about working it up more to be honest. I think it has a charming, loose quality as-is.
my 2 cents have been deposited!
:: Spartan ::
To be absoliutely truthful...the pink feather thing up top just doesnt fit in. Looks like a flamingo dancer....then we see the 'empress' get up and we're like, "Woaaaah?"
Hey Chris, nice start so far mate.
As far as crits, take this with a bit of salt because I'm still processing my caffeine and haven't woken up yet! (A smiley with stubble-finally!)
There's something bothering me with the legs here. It's a bit tricky for me to judge because I'm trying to scroll the image up and down to get it, but it's making her look slightly unbalanced. I'm not sure, but I think it's the left hip is protruding slightly too much, it's making her hips look ever so slightly misaligned.
Then again, it could all be okay and my brain just can't deal with things this early! Either way I like the piece and think it will look great when it's finished. Keep it up buddy.