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    crystal artifact (changed update)

    ok just finished this up tonight, its some left over tech among the ruins surround by snow etc. its part of a large idea i have, for now its heading into the colour section of the old folio.

    crystal artifact (changed update)

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    reworked the crystal a bit to the original design.

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    the new crystal looks much better, the older one looked out of perspective.
    good change
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    hm, it doesn't look very snowy - the snow needs to have more volume, right now it just looks like the lighting in the scene is really bright.
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    cool and star crafty like!.. you have a cool style that im noticing more and more.
    may want to throw shadows being cast from the 3 "finger" like guards
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    I like it so far but I think it needs to be a little sharper, and have more detail. Like fin detail I mean. As of now, everything looks kinda rounded and friendly. Ithink it'd look much better with more corners and little cracks and other minute details.
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    thanks everyone for the great feedback

    crystal artifact (changed update)

    i have made changes and well this is the result

    BlueMech

    thanks for the kick up the arse, much need and welcome

    NOOSE

    when i read this i slapped myself silly, i should have spotted that a mile away


    squirpy,

    i worked up the snow more and have it cover more ground and flowing around the objects more.


    B-nine

    thanks the older one was meant to be a warped crystal much like the natural crystal.

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    Looks great! but still keep em coming!
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    thanks noose, the next one is already underway , the colour wash/rough is up already, should take a day or two to get it squared away. still 3 colour images down, 12 more to go .

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