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    3 more compositions, I try to make interesting compositions, it's not easy I know and some are really crap but still there's a learning curve in this exersices


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    One quick suggestion... Try not to have your horizon line right in the center of the camera. It makes the shot a lot less dynamic


    Try some movie studies man!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Saraiva View Post
    One quick suggestion... Try not to have your horizon line right in the center of the camera. It makes the shot a lot less dynamic
    Try some movie studies man!
    Oh shit! you are right, will make it better nice to see you are updating your SB as well
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    Haven't done much as I have a lot of work this days, here a wolf

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    Quote Originally Posted by motato View Post
    Haven't done much as I have a lot of work this days, here a wolf

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    Vomitwolf - patron saint of town drunks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tiggeraz View Post
    Vomitwolf - patron saint of town drunks.
    Ha, sounds correct
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    Hi Motato, good stuff, about your last wolf I drew on top (Hope you don't mind)
    specifically his eye, the one you drew looks like something bite him in the ass or something, it doesn't look menacing at all.
    I made him look straight and focused if that makes sense, as in if it where about to attack locking at his prey.
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    This is the "final" of the logo
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    More composition drawings, I will develope futher more the ones I like.

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    If you're trying to learn about composition you are making it extremely hard for yourself using square dimensions. Square pieces are insanely difficult to make look attractive, it's just not pleasing to the eye. Focal points either feel too close together or a single focal point feels cramped in a box. Is there any reason why you're using dimensions like these? Try using 1920x1080 like dimensions for your environments, will make it a lot easier to create a pleasing composition. Your anatomy studies throughout the sketchbook are really nice and I especially like the style you've used to illustrate some of them.
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    Last batch of composition practice.
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    A new idea for a possible illustration.

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    Nice stuff!, On the turtle one I have a couple suggestions:

    Take another look at his anatomy, the pectoralis is not a square is has tail that is connected to the arm, the serratus you made them with straight lines breaking the gesture of the body (the SA is round) also take another look at legs they appear to have no muscles you could draw the quads better here. Finally his left arm is too small I think it should be a bit bigger.

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    I just finished this poster illustration, a fan art from MGSV.

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