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    Talking Gallery can you Please Critique my Work

    Hey all..I have been a big fan of everyone's work..I have been a production artist for a long time and have always been a concept artist in my heart.
    I am lookin to try to get a job in the game/film industry and I would like someone
    with some experience to take a look at a few samples of my work..they are by no means all of what I have just a about 10 samples of concept/stage/packaging and illustrations. Please take a look and give me some feed back..the site takes about 20 seconds to load but please take the time2.
    Your CC is sooo greatly appreciated. Links are as follows..its in flash

    http://members.cox.net/coreycalloway...allsamples.swf

    Gallery can you Please Critique my Workhttp://members.cox.net/coreycalloway...allsamples.swf

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    Not interesting, but it´s looks really unfinished. Try to invest more time for linework details and coloring. Post the progress of the artwork in the "SKETCHES, IDEAS..." forum.

    -Skureal

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    Angry

    Cally:

    The idea is average to average -. The village appears to be vertical, the castle needs work, and the deer looks sick (may have cancer or some severe viral infection). Other than that...it is kind of dry and could use some color. Maybe you should cheer up a little bit? Try vacationing in Scandinavia or something.

    Oblique...LONS

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