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Hi guys I havent really posted much since ive joined so ive taken off a bit of time and started to get used to my Graphics Tablet, so here it is, its not much but hey im a beginner.
(Look carefully at the one with clouds)
A Crit would be extremely helpful.
Last edited by jsbhachu; September 6th, 2004 at 04:30 PM.
love the 3rd cloud picture , missed it first time round but It really is something different which is hard to come by.
on your 2nd picture your water/ocean looks amazing, love what you did there and crit on the 4th picture the red "reflections" on the left most platform look out of place, dont think they would travel distance as those building they come from look far away.
Keep it up, looking good.
nice stuff getting the hang of the tablet and painting in photoshop( or painter ) is not easy but these look like good test runs, the parting of the clouds is cool, what it needs is a rocket or aircraft cutting though.
still good job.
nothing to lose so go for it
I caught sight of the third picture down, and I couldnt stop staring. Its a very well done image. the fourth one seems a bit off to me, with some of the red streaks of light on the buildings, but all your images are well done.
(¯`·._.· Without wings·._.·´¯)
Thanks for crits guys there going to help alot, oh and defcombeta the reason for the gap in the clouds was because im going to have a figure with wings flying through, i hope to implement that one soon and post it up.
Interesting compositions and concepts, but I think you should try varying your colour palette a bit more in your images. A small variationcan make a great difference.
If you look at life, A red surface is never 100% red all the way... it has less saturated area's and subtle variations in the hue... a bit more blue here, a bit more orange there. If I have your permission I can take one of your images and show ya what im getting at. I think you have some great imagery there.
Yeah sketchling if youd like to alter any of my images give me a shout and ill send you higher res images if you want
Hi guys ive just finished this one, it took me about 1.5 hours, tell me if im getting any better in anyway, if not another crit would do fine.
I like that Thats an image that works well with a limited number of colours... the night feel. anyways, took yer city one and played with its colours a bit. Just a quick thing and to be honest its much better to build up the colours than edit them afterwards, but have a look at this: www.sketchling.com/sketches/colour_ideas.jpg
You might not like the choice of colours, as thats always specific to each artist, but the fact that there is a range of different hues and saturation makes it more lively. I tried not to differ from your image too much to keep the feel I thought you were going for.
Anyways, my 2 cents worth. Keep em coming!
Cheers sketchling that image has more depth to it, i understand what you mean, ill try giving it a go in my future pieces.
Keep the Crits coming guys its helping me to improve, ill be posting up more work on this thread soon so look out
heres a couple of paintings i did with a mouse a while back, i didnt really get the effects i was hoping, but hey it was worth a try rite? or was it? crit required lol
Hi guys ive got my university Final project up, its a 3D animated short called 'Escape' tell me what you think
Escape 3D Animated Short by Jar