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    Arrow Rae Gun - ZZzzzap!

    I've finally seen the light and opened an account here, & I have to say that the standard of work is second to none.

    Here's my offering - it's a recent character design I've been working on - any comments & crits welcome.

    Rae Gun - ZZzzzap!
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    the concept's just fiiiiiine ;p There are just some rendering errors to point out. First, her lower legs have too much of a curve and appear broken. Second, the lines depicting the interior of her butt cheek ar really strange and make it look like she has spheres for an ass. Lastly, the curve of the top of her thigh, or the "dorsal side" of her thigh should peak closer to her pelvis... Yeah... anatomical technical stuff. But please, keep up the pleasant subject matter

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    theres no purple reflected light on the blue objects, or blue reflected light on the purple lady...nor shadows to insinuate that the lady and her blue gun and rocket are sharing the same space.
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