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    old contest entry

    This was just the finished piece that I did for the CGNetworks contest, Machineflesh. I picked it apart after I submitted, but a little too late. I think I might of had the tunnel vision thing going on. I would love to hear comments on how it could've been improved.

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    well....when i think of flesh...i think red. I think that it is a beautiful piece, but i personally would like to see a wider range of color...a splash of red i think would help..but the idea and execution is awesome
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    This picture is awsome but i would change couple of things. Like nofingers said it could use some other colors. And about the body what is hanging down it could use a head then it would look much better, like a upper body of a man hanging there, searching something. Oh, and the floor could use some more details infront, its way too blury.

    Good work and i hope my comment helps a bit.
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