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    Kremena Chipilova-Composition 1.1

    Hello everyone !
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    I find it way more easy the more I do , I could make it a daily practice -a study under an hour a day .

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    You are getting about 90 percent there with the three most important things...shapes, values and edges. are you flipping your images horizontally and vertically every minute or so to check accuracy? The main key moving forward, as I shared with others at this same point, is to focus on quality control. Do them as checkpoints.

    Make a pass at the beginning, middle and end where you double check the following, in this order.

    a. shapes.
    b. values
    c. edges

    At this point all I think that is needed is double checking things at the end in a quality control pass...so to speak.

    Keep up the great work.


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    Thanks a lot for the feedback ,Jason!
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    Next study- 1h Polenov's landscape painting. I 'm not very satisfied with my landscape studies,that's why I think I try avoid them ...
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    30 min study

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    Kremena Chipilova-Composition 1.1
    My last two studies,can't wait to do the next assignments.Here I spent a bit more time on double checking the values .I really loved thee two works.The main contrast in both of them is in the character ,who is the emphasis of the piece and the foreground is more grayish and simple,which is where I found the economy principle in a good use .
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    These are looking really good. The main area to focus on is in surface texture at this point as you are working in a smoother manner than the originals and it is having an effect on your atmosphere and edges.

    With that said, you are being accurate and consistent and can keep pushing there. Outside that you are making great progress quality wise, and I encourage you to keep going as you are will see great results with improvement in your own work if so.

    I do think it would be great to see some more analysis of the compositions as I am curious to read your thoughts on these images you are deeply looking into. What do you see?

    Keep it up.


    JM

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