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    EOW Round #238: Smoking on the Rooftop

    EOW Round #238: Smoking on the Rooftop
    EOW Round #238: Smoking on the Rooftop


    TOPIC: Smoking on the Rooftop

    Brief:

    A person or an object could be smoking on that rooftop. Is it a business mogul or a villain with a cigar, or is something burning up there because war is at hand? Interpret this topic how you see fit.


    Other Guidelines:
    1. Design an environment that adheres to the topic/theme.
    2. You must post at least once in this W.I.P. thread to be included in the finals thread for the voting poll.
    3. It must be evident that your environment is rooftop-based.


    Congratulations to thechaoder for winning Round #236!


    Deadline: September 16, 2014


    Post your final entries in the "FINAL BURNING" thread which I will post a week or so before the due date. If you need more time to get your finals in, let me know and I'll extend the deadline.

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    A quick sketch.

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    I need to practice my enviros.
    May i play?
    Here is wip thumbnail 1
    I took reference from an exising piece
    I will have to get the name of artist
    Concept 1 rooftop lounge with a mixture of charbroil smoke, cigg smoke, and mist and haze
    and a general feeling of spacey cool laid backedness
    WIP 1 is still real loose
    EOW Round #238: Smoking on the Rooftop

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    "Smokies" Rooftop Lounge/ Autechre will be spinning at midnight so the crowd has not shown up yet...

    loose interpretation/ letting my mind flow
    lemme know if it fits the brief
    EOW Round #238: Smoking on the Rooftop

    Last edited by FROZ3N; September 9th, 2014 at 12:05 PM.
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    Little update.

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    was going to go for a 'witching hour' type thing

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    nice depth fellas.
    I lost that somewhere along the way
    oh well
    Chaoder; the first wip registers more depth in my mind
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    Quick sketch

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    Gonna put some effort in this one...quick wip: mountain-hanging-type structure with dude on it...something like that.

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    Name:  wip2_eow_smoking-roof.jpg
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    Mmmm... I'm done actually but something is not good :-(


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    Changed the whole thing...next work more on lightning...

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    @ThomD: Good, so far. Please don't forget about the 'smoke' part of the brief.

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    Name:  EOW_smoking-rooftop_1000px_width.jpg
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    Current state...if anybody has advices, I'd like to hear them


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    Mirichuuei, looks really good but you need to change the perspective on the top of the building he is standing on. It has to be way more horizontal, right now he is standing on a slope. If you fix that I think it will look fantastic!

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    @mirichuuei: Hi! Hope this helps.

    First I tracked the questionable vanishing point.

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    So, the foreground wall should be point towards that vanishing point.

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    Used the scale of the person to decide how far the wall goes towards the horizon.
    And we must be able to see the top of the buildings indicated on the right.
    The camera is at the height of that guy's neck(or in level with horizon obviously). Those buildings are below horizon.
    Also the scale of the sniper might be adjusted accordingly.

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    Hope its looking little better now.

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    Oh, thanks so much! I will fix that!


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    WIP. Still have to work on the helicopter, may be few soldiers...

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    w.i.p. update, guys can you please check my perspective? something feels wrong there, but I can't find mistake.

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    @pavelmorr: Looks OK to me. Perspective need not be perfect in environment paintings as long as we avoid major mistakes.

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    @pavelmorr: Perspective looks pretty good. Scale of the figure on the roof seems a bit off...slightly too big.

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    Made another one....hope its not o dark or to bright...work on different computers which have slight different monitor settings...O and reduced the size considerably because scrolling through an image is fucked up.

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    First EOW challenge... here's what I've come up with so far, still working on rendering (who wants to sketch buildings into all that space anyway?).

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    The smoke's going to be coming from the village clusters.

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    Another WIP... hopefully I can get it done in less than 24 hours

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