Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast
Results 1 to 13 of 15

Thread: Art

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Mar 2014
    Posts
    79
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Art

    what do you think

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    Sweden Malmö
    Posts
    626
    Thanks
    161
    Thanked 167 Times in 140 Posts
    I think that the colour scheme looks more thought through that many of your other paintings that I have seen. The biggest problem is that the hand looks like it's facing the wrong way. The thumb should be on the other side. As in many of your peices there are parts that I find appealing while other parts throws me off. In this one I like the colours. the composition, the way you painted her hair and the expression of the girl. But the rendering of the face looks sloppy. I get the distinct impression that you don't plan your paintings very much. You throw some paint on the canvas and hope for the best. That is fine I suppose but if you really want to improve it's not going to cut it.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  4. #3
    Join Date
    Apr 2014
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    550
    Thanks
    58
    Thanked 161 Times in 110 Posts
    I think you are unwilling to improve and it puzzles me why you still come and want critique on your pieces when you don't listen to the advices given.

    This painting has the same issues as all the others, starting with the ones you posted over 5 months ago, which are weak underlying structure, sloppy rendering, pictographic facial features and so on. But i am sure this was all done intentional since this is a neo expressionistic piece, right?

    Anything unrelated to elephants is irrelephant.

    Sketchbook
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  5. The Following User Says Thank You to Tiggeraz For This Useful Post:


  6. #4
    Join Date
    Mar 2014
    Posts
    79
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    thanks

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  7. #5
    Join Date
    Mar 2014
    Posts
    79
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    also...the hand is correct

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  8. #6
    Join Date
    Mar 2014
    Posts
    79
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    ...also. Ive been doing this for a while and I am gonna get only but so much more technical. This is my style and either you critique me based on the confines of my style or you don't critique me. I am not a beginner so you are not gonna see a drastic improvement. You could tell me to draw but i do. I am as good as i am gonna get. Besides technical ability doesnt necessarily make you a better artist.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  9. #7
    Join Date
    Apr 2014
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    550
    Thanks
    58
    Thanked 161 Times in 110 Posts
    Quote Originally Posted by dotcov666 View Post
    ...also. Ive been doing this for a while and I am gonna get only but so much more technical. This is my style and either you critique me based on the confines of my style or you don't critique me. I am not a beginner so you are not gonna see a drastic improvement. You could tell me to draw but i do. I am as good as i am gonna get. Besides technical ability doesnt necessarily make you a better artist.
    Please allow me to answer with this post-expressionistic drawing.

    Name:  le-laughing-face.jpg
Views: 349
Size:  28.2 KB

    Anything unrelated to elephants is irrelephant.

    Sketchbook
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  10. The Following User Says Thank You to Tiggeraz For This Useful Post:


  11. #8
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    Haifa, Israel
    Posts
    4,485
    Thanks
    2,462
    Thanked 2,499 Times in 1,548 Posts
    Come on guys, he'll never improve because all he wants is to show off these pictures and feed off your attention. He's been doing the same thing for ages. Stop paying attention to trolls.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  12. #9
    Join Date
    Apr 2014
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    550
    Thanks
    58
    Thanked 161 Times in 110 Posts
    Quote Originally Posted by arenhaus View Post
    Come on guys, he'll never improve because all he wants is to show off these pictures and feed off your attention. He's been doing the same thing for ages. Stop paying attention to trolls.
    Unless you hang out warning signs i'm afraid there is nothing to stop people from paying attention. These threads are like car accidents, you know it's terrible and sad but you can't just walk by.

    Anything unrelated to elephants is irrelephant.

    Sketchbook
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  13. #10
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    Sweden Malmö
    Posts
    626
    Thanks
    161
    Thanked 167 Times in 140 Posts
    I thought that it was worth a shot. People change and mature given time....and sometimes they don't.

    dotcov
    If you are not interested in a qritique and really feel that you are as good as you are going to get, the WIP and critique section is not the right place to post. You are waisting peoples time and energy.

    The fine art section is probably a better place for you paintings.
    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/for...php/7-FINE-ART

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  14. #11
    Join Date
    Mar 2014
    Posts
    79
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    i want a critique but what you guys are giving me is not that. Maybe you guys should ignore me if you can't critique,

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  15. #12
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Location
    New York
    Posts
    362
    Thanks
    83
    Thanked 58 Times in 52 Posts
    You should stick closer to the reference.

    Art

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  16. The Following 3 Users Say Thank You to Darnis For This Useful Post:


  17. #13
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    Sweden Malmö
    Posts
    626
    Thanks
    161
    Thanked 167 Times in 140 Posts
    Oh! that is why the hand looked like it was backwards. In the painting it looks like it belongs to the other arm. It was impossible to see that there was another hand underneath.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast

Members who have read this thread: 7

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
  • 424,149 Artists
  • 3,599,276 Artist Posts
  • 32,941 Sketchbooks
  • 54 New Art Jobs
Art Workshop Discount Inside
Register

Developed Actively by vBSocial.com
SpringOfSea's Sketchbook