new at this site. would love to hear your opinions
 
View testimonialsView Artwork
Results 1 to 5 of 5
  1. #1
    Join Date
    Aug 2014
    Posts
    20
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    new at this site. would love to hear your opinions

    Hello everyone.

    My name is Itai and I'm 26 years old. I have recently decided I want to work as a concept artist. I had drawn before but composition and color balance are pretty new to me. Here are two of my newest attempts and some other unfinished works where I have tried to work with composition. I would love to hear some constructive criticism to learn how to improve my skills. Thank you

    Name:  concept blue mt fin4.jpg
Views: 203
Size:  347.4 KB
    Name:  postapoc5.jpg
Views: 162
Size:  251.4 KB
    Name:  concept piza.jpg
Views: 162
Size:  213.5 KB
    Name:  mountains.jpg
Views: 155
Size:  271.4 KB
    Name:  itai's kishkush.jpg
Views: 159
Size:  230.7 KB
    Name:  1 finish.jpg
Views: 164
Size:  889.2 KB

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Location
    Switzerland
    Posts
    453
    Thanks
    16
    Thanked 87 Times in 79 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    I'll only comment on the first two pieces, since they seem to represent what you can do much more.

    I think that you might not have had replies because you posted too many pictures, but also that there isn't a huge and obvious flaw with your paintings.

    Basically I see flaws with all fundamentals. The perspective is wonky and obviously guessed. You need to learn how to build proper perspective, and build all of the lines on a layer. You simply won't be able to just guess it. Also, you're spending too much time on tiny details, showing some sort of scale problems too. Make sure you use the perspective lines to build things according to proper scales. You also need to work a bit on the values, plotting the light source, building volumes using it. The line work also needs work, since alot of things that should have straight lines have wonky lines and seem wrong, especially when human made.

    Basically focus a bit more on the technical aspect of painting, starting probably with perspective, linework and so on.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  4. #3
    Join Date
    Jan 2013
    Posts
    60
    Thanks
    23
    Thanked 31 Times in 23 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    First- I really like the background, sky and trees but the little town and pathway are out of place. It also looks like daytime, the lamps wouldnt light anything up like that in daytime. The path is a little confusing too im not sure if the ground in the fore ground is connected to the path in the middleground.

    Second- In my ooinion its the best out of the shows shown, cant see much wrong with it other than i find the water a little hard to read. At first i thought it was some kind of thick mist.

    Third- one of the weaker ones, looks vey unfinised, no idea what is going on or what the forms are.

    Fourth- foreground is a little messy and composition seems cropped weirdly.

    Fifth- same as fourth. colours look muddy. water doesnt read well.

    Sixth- second best in my opinion. although all the focal points (man and building) seem to centerised and content seems heavy on the right side.and the mans shadow needs to be rethought, currently it suggests the sun is infront of him

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  5. #4
    Join Date
    Oct 2005
    Location
    Munich, Germany
    Posts
    1,622
    Thanks
    210
    Thanked 639 Times in 365 Posts
    Follows
    1
    Following
    0
    Quote Originally Posted by stephou View Post
    Basically I see flaws with all fundamentals.
    I'll second that. Get Norling: Perspective made easy and gurney: Color and Light. That will get you started both on perspective as well as colour- although for the latter nothing beats painting from life (naything really, even a simple still life will teach you lots).

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

  6. #5
    Join Date
    Aug 2014
    Posts
    20
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Thank you all for your replies. Really needed your opinions to see the level im in. So I guess I'll start with the fundamentals. And thanks for the resources.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote

Members who have read this thread: 46

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
  • 424,149 Artists
  • 3,599,276 Artist Posts
  • 32,941 Sketchbooks
  • 54 New Art Jobs
Art Workshop Discount Inside
Register

Developed Actively by vBSocial.com
The Art Department
SpringOfSea's Sketchbook