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    jamesmart composition 1.1

    Hello,

    My name is James Myers.

    I have the following questions:

    A. I have noticed that some people go over the one hour mark on their studies. Should I stay within the hour mark even if it means not everything will get painted?

    My first study.


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    I chose this piece from John William Waterhouse because to me it really focuses on "Economy" and "Emphasis." Everything is extremely loose until you get to the face.


    2nd study.

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    Another John Willaim Waterhouse study.

    I chose this one Mainly for the Rhythm/Energy I see. To me the wind is the main subject of the painting, the woman/clothing/trees/grass are there to help tell that.




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    Nice start on these. You are headed in the right direction. When you get your shapes worked out well, pay very close attention to the values. You want to match the values you see as closely as you can. It is important to be very honest about what you are seeing. try to put the accurate value down with each stroke as otherwise you end up having to fix things along the way and being accurate will save you time. Really take the time to observe and compare and choose the right value. If you are off, adjust it, don't keep working and come back to it. You are doing great...just need to focus in on value a little more.

    Keep it up.


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    btw....you can go over the hour mark and most do, you are right. Speed will come. The key is to balance the study quality and putting in time on analysis of the compositions so that you keep your mind on why the image was constructed the way it was and not just on how it was painted technically. The main reason for the shorter time frame suggestion is to keep folks from worrying about fingernails and eyelashes if the compositions are not being studied and the larger value, shape and edge patterns are left from the front of the mind. This study process pushes artists to work from general to specific and also to keep an eye on the compositional elements as said.

    Take as much time as you need though...there is no rush.


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    3rd study

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    John William Godward Study.
    I noticed in this painting how he placed the woman in the middle of the painting, and her right arm also leads you to the head. The upper 3rd of the painting is all dark which helps to frame the her head and torso.

    4th Study.

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    Sargent Study
    For this one I see a zig zag composition. From her head you follow the top of the couch to her hand, and then from the hand over to the chest. From the chest I go to her right arm down the dress then back up to the couch from the couch leg.

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    I like how the ropes frame/lead you to the 2 faces, and I really like the nice S-curve that the girl has.

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    I really like how the faces are arranged in this painting. There is a nice rhythm to them. One face leads you to the next face and so on and so on. Nice use of continuity.

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    These are getting progressively better with each one. I really like seeing that happen. good work.

    You are getting about 90 percent there with the three most important things...shapes, values and edges. are you flipping your images horizontally and vertically every minute or so to check accuracy?

    Make a pass at the end where you double check the following, in this order.

    a. shapes.
    b. values
    c. edges

    At this point all I think that is needed is double checking things at the end in a quality control pass...so to speak.

    Keep up the great work.


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