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    Darth Vader - quick c&c!

    Hi this is for an editioral for SOAK Magazine. I finished it yesterday but wanted some quick critiques before I hand it in on Aug 11.

    The caption is going to say "Can you hear me now?"
    Darth Vader - quick c&c!

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    the 'eye's bother me, the way one looks bigger than the other. Also the way the head is placed is a bit awkward, besides that it is pretty cool.

    you might also want to try playing around more with texture in some places, the shadows under the arm seem a bit plain and that draws my eye to them.

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    The head looks kinda flat and skewed, but I'm assuming that's artistic styling. Pretty cool. On a side note: I hate cell phones.

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    (just some more info) This is going to be a quarter page illo

    davi - great! thanks for the c&c. The eyes are different sizes because it was supposed to be one eyebrow down and one eyebrow up. I'll fix it up! and spruce up the shadows a bit too.

    BlueMech - Thanks!

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    HAHA, I love this!!! Darth Vador, with a cell phone, can you hear me now!!! HAHA!!! The humor is immense!!!

    It looks great, I think it is ready for print as is. In my opinion the things mentioned before work for the concept not against it!!!

    Word up, nice painting!!!

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    Spacemanchuck - thanks! guess not everyone thinks so...cuz this thread has been moved to the beginners section... lol.

    Actually I agree with a bunch of the c&c given. I'll try harder next time I guess and try to get back into the pros section... at least I have some other threads in the pros section...

    Please checkout my other posts as well
    3 samurais on horseback thread
    Muhammad Ali - knockout punch

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