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    CSMethod - COMPOSITION 1.1

    Hello everyone! My name is Victor, I am new here and very glad to finally take part in this workshop.

    This is my first submission for composition 1.1, I chose Mr. Frazetta's work The black Panther. His work inspires me a lot, the energy, the composition and the depicted scene, I find them all formidable.

    The "S" curve drives the eye slowly towards the action, as well as the position of the heroes is in complete opposition .
    On this study I spent ~4 hrs


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    CSMethod - COMPOSITION 1.1 2nd submission

    Hello again, this is my second submission, I picked Wyeth's work and first thing I noticed in this painting is how all the lines are pointing towards the hero but in order to obtain balance and to stop the eye wonder on the botom, the painter used an abrupt horizontal line to delimit the main area and bring balance. I spent on this piece 5hrs
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    CSMethod composition 1.1 study 3

    Another study, this time i decided to leave out the details and render, thus spent less time on it
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    CSMethod - Composition 1.1 4th submission

    Hello,
    This is my fourth submission, spent under 2hrs on it.

    Thisrst thing i noticed is how Wyeth created this tension in the painting, looks like these man are hunting someone or something, but at the same time the man on the right looks worried behind as if something is catching up with them, the values are really subtle and nice, and we see the principle of repetition,the branches of the tree on the left and the men on the botom

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    Hey Victor these are awesome! they're really solid and they look confident. It doesn't seem like there was any meandering or "over-doing" of anything. I think if I had to point out one thing you could work on, it would just be adding a little bit of texture to some of the surfaces. Other than that, I think they're great.

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    Really nice work. I would recommend integrating some textured brushes to capture the surface quality a bit as it tends to affect edges and the overall feel of the originals and doing so will see you bump up quality to the next level. These are really solid though so keep them coming!!

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    CSMethod - COMPOSITION 1.1 5th submission

    Thank you for your replies, for this study I worked only with a textured brush, and I tried to provide the much needed textured look to my image, I still need to figure out how to achieve that canvas texture I notice on the original. I really like the composition and the contrasting values in this painting.
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    CSMethod - COMPOSITION 1.1 submission 6

    Decided to follow up with the next study
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    CSMethod - Composition 1.1 7th submission

    For my 7th submission I picked Gerome's work, there are couple of principles one notices right away, like variaty, repetition and balance in this paiting.
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    CSMethod - Composition 1.1

    Hello, this is my 8th submission, a study of Wyeth's work
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    CSMethod - COMPOSITION 1.1

    Hey everyone,

    this is another Frazetta study, I really enjoy his art, due to a specific dynamic feel he achieves in his paintings
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    CSMethod - COMPOSITION 1.1

    Hi everyone, another NC Wyeth study , one thing i quickly notice is how all the lines drive the eye towards the hero.
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    CSMethod - COMPOSITION 1.1

    Decided to actually start following the exercise and spend around 1 hour on this study
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