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Thread: Please do C&C or paintover.
August 18th, 2014 #1
Please do C&C or paintover.
This is my own concept . I struggled a bit with colors. I drew the character linear and then I added some color. Should I start firts with grayscale?
Last edited by MarcinBystrzycki; August 29th, 2014 at 07:08 AM.
Hide this ad by registering as a memberSeptember 2nd, 2014 #2
I think the anatomy could use a bit more work, but the main problem I have is basically structure. It doesn't seem like you're trying to build shapes or form. It seems by far your biggest weakness.
You need to work a bit more on values, volumes and shapes to understand how things really work and how light affects volumes. For now it seems to me like you're just using some lighting you've seen on some other paintings without really understanding it. A perfect example are the legs : they seem completely flat.
September 13th, 2014 #3
Thanks for the critique. Now I know what to focus on.
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