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    Question Daily struggles to improve!

    Hello;
    I really want some critique on my work. this is not my latest work but recently I've been going through this direction.
    Any tips on how to improve my work?
    thankyou!
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    I would go with deeper shadows, really push the sinister aspect of the piece. Also, even with the exaggerated cinching up of her waist, I think we need to see the actual hip structure more...it shouldn't be just round and bulbous like that. Her neck is also a bit off-center from her torso (and it is not because of the perspective).

    Lovely start, though. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
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    thankyou so much for the critique. I will improve it now
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