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This is a piece for a personal project. Having brought it so far, and before I finished it, I was wondering if I could get some comments on it. What I could fix to make it better. Any and all advice will be helpful. Thanks.
Neat piece. I don't see anything obviously wrong with it but maybe you can add some security guards to give the piece more life. I would put some on the bridge as well. As for the drone I'd move him to the side of the entrance a bit next to a guard and give it some effects like some smoke or blinking lights. To me, the way the drone is placed looks awkward being right in the centre. Hope this helps.
Thanks a ton for the comment . I'll make sure I fix all those things before I wrap it up. Thats super cool advice.
Hey there, nice work! The rendering and atmosphere look good, though it could use to be spiced up a bit. I can see it's not supposed to be an action scene or anything, but a little more snazz and bits of visual interest would help to draw the viewer in. But my main concern is that there's no real focal point. I know the droid is supposed to be, thanks to those handy yellow arrows and the spotlight, but the white droid is set in front of a white wall and almost disappears. My brain focuses on those big red panels instead.
So yeah, spice it up a bit and emphasize the focal point, and this piece should wrap up nicely
ha ha! Thanks so much for the spice it up. I had fixed a lot of things. But the spice it up really made me rethink everything. The spice is on its way. Hope i get it right though. Thanks for the comment, really. Thank you. It is extremely helpful. Will post something before I finish. please do feel free to comment if you have time.
Nice improvement! This time there is definitely more emphasis on the drone. However, using the rule of thirds I would move the drone a bit to the right so that more of the middle of it touches the lines. Also, I would change the crop so that the drone sits roughly in the middle, close to the red line. Right now it looks too low, which isn't good for a focal. I like the idea of an electric fence overhead but it's too bright and distracting from the drone. Maybe crop out some of it instead? Hope this helps.