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    Critique please!

    This is one of my latest pictures where i kinda went crazy with colours and making glowing alien like fauna. Any thoughts?

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    Hi MaximusT,

    This looks pretty cool, well done. I could see it being used as something like an establishing shot to show where a hermit lives on this alien world.

    My only nitpicky crits would be that 1) the house seems a bit too traditionally constructed and does not match the wildly imaginative surroundings, and 2) the image could be cropped a bit tighter on the right side, about where the "1" in "2014" is in your signature.

    Best of luck with everything
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    Hey Maximus,
    I think alex is right about the house and cropping. I dont know much myself, but if I was to suggest, and I dont mean to step out of bounds so please feel free to ignore, you could blend the design language of the house with the environment. If not completely, then atleast a wee bit more. Also it would be nice to add a couple of support (smaller) structures, the house is too lonely out there. Or may be add some life. Like cattle or chickens or sheep/goat, something like that. To give it some life. It will make the piece all the more awesome. Could be neon creatures.

    Great work though. Its super cool!

    Cheers.
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