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August 10th, 2014 #1
Azra, The Summoner
Hey, everyone. Looking for a critique on this creature I've designed for my portfolio. The entire portfolio will revolve around a mock IP I'm developing. In short, it's a video game about Gods who have destroyed the entirety of humanity, and all that lingers are the droids that were designed by the humans as a defense against the gods. The androids continue their mission to try and eradicate the gods and bring humanity back into existence.
This creature is the angel, Azra. She can summon powerful creatures onto the battle. Most of the angels will share a few of the same design elements - bone-like bodies and circular forms. Wanted her design to sort of follow the appearance of a witch. Also, I thought it would be cool to fuse her hands with the staffs she uses. Anyway, enough bullshit. Just wanted to give you guys a general idea on what I was going for.
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Hey man how goes it? I enjoy your piece here; and I can't wait to see more!
Okay one thing I can point out to you is that the right side of her chest, from our viewpoint, is very flat; not just "flat-chested", but lacking form; your light source is coming from the top left-this is good- so work out casting some shadows onto her right breast. Overall I would say the perspective is sound.
Just punch up those values a bit more as a whole. Give us some more "darker" darks.
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August 11th, 2014 #3
Thanks, mate! I'll try and work up the forms during the next pass.