so i have a problem, and it's mostly her face among other things, but yeah, mostly the angle of her face and her eyes are bothering me a lot
if anyone could show me how to fix her face, that would be grand, thanks!
Hmm her face looks okay to me. Something might be off and I just can't see it.
I'm more concerned about her arms - I'm not sure they are foreshortened correctly. Her right upper arm looks like it's extremely short. The extra cloth on her left arm makes it looks like her left arm is attached too close to her chest.
The colors are great though, it's coming along really nicely
This is a pretty nice looking piece overall but her body seems to be twisting in ways that it can't. It's also really difficult to tell what her actual intent is in this moment. If you work that out I think you'll be able to pinpoint any issues with the anatomy and fix them.
First thing - the piece has a really cool flow/gesture to it and that counts more than anatomy IMO.
Now, about the face - it's the nose that makes it look weird. The whole face is drawn so as to be seen from below the chin but the nose is drawn at generic eye level. Also the ear is too damn high - since she is looking up, it's not aligned horizontally with the eyes anymore.