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    This is my first post. Critiques are appreciated. I Chose to do this because I simply feel like I'm having more fun at sketching / Painting. So yeah, I actually missed the first 10 mins of class for this. LOL.

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    Hi Randommango, welcome to conceptart, tell us about yourself. I would have to say that the character looks flat. There are a lot of issues with the anatomy and proportions that make it look 2 dimensional. You should do some studies to understand form and anatomy, it'll teach you a lot. Then post them here and we'll give feedback.

    Good luck.

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    Thanks Cfhhunt. I'll definitely do more anatomy practices! I had to make the post quick because I had to go to class.

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    By the way I don't know if I'm starting a sketchbook right on this website, I hope starting this thread is the right way to post my sketches.

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    Yup, you're doing it right so far. Just keep uploading and learning and listening to critiques; we've got a good community here.

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    So here are my recent Practices and Sketches.

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    Some Master Copies I did. This definitely helped me with my line weight.

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    More anatomy. I'm going to try being more consistent with my studies. Ill slowly go throughout the body starting from the hands.

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    So compare and contrast? its from my first post. I tried fixing up the anatomy. I really stylized the first one more close to anime! But I pushed myself to fix the Anatomy A LOT!
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    The very first creature I designed myself with all the knowledge of anatomy i know as of now:
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    Here's a painting i drew up for my friend's birthday
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