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    waldelord- Color & Light 1.1

    I think I look like my. Some say that like as in nature but not good enough to me to the end is a little artificial. Help me improve this workshop.
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    Nice start here. Take a look at some of rembrandt's self portraits to see how he uses soft and sharp edges to describe theforms of the face. Right now your outer edge on the shadow side is of a similar sharpness and I think you can increase your edge qualities to include softer or lost edges to get the form to read more in space. Also a bit more observation on the forms of anatomy under the shirt...some values describing the body under the shirt would be helpful too.

    Keep up the great work. There are some good things happening here.


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    You have done a great job with the face, the ear doesn't seem quite right though.

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