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    Harsh Critique Needed.

    Hello everyone!

    I'm teaching myself to draw and I'd be truly grateful to anyone who can offer some critique and general advice on what I should be doing.
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    Blocks and general perspective:

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    I was asked to do a drawing of a bat so i may as well add this one to the sketchbook.

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    Today i arranged some small boxes and did still life studies.

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    The bottle gave me a lot of problems.
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    Drawing the bottle from different angles:

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    Hands!

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    More hands!

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    Those are some great studies. I like how because you struggled with the bottle, you made yourself draw it again twenty times from different angles. That type of attitude is going to get you far! You already have a pretty good foundation and you're only going to get better.
    Check out my sketchbook! Socially acceptable opportunity to yell at a teenage girl!
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    aw thanks! Stubbornness helps a lot lol
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    One more hand for tonight. It still looks kinda 'flat' and i don't know how to fix it. Gonna have to draw more hands tomorrow i guess

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    More more hands!

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    I'll do some tonal value studies next.
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    I used a lamp in order to get a better sense of light and shadow for this value study:

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    Somewhat happy with the results but i know it could be far far better.
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    Testing what i know about lighting.

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    Looking at it carefully now...

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