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    This is my first year 12 art major. I'm really happy with it but it is lacking something and I am unsure of what it is. I'm afraid it's done and dealt with as I need to move on to other tasks but I would like to hear your thoughts for future reference. This was also my first real undertaking in Photoshop but a lot was still done in illustrator as that is where I know what I'm doing Sorry for the quality and size. I wanted to be able to upload the file so I had to compress it Name:  Full - Low Quality.jpg
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    (edit): Sorry for the picture. I was having trouble with it saving funny.

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    The composition is uninterestingly centered. The values are so uniform that we're losing the figure. Same goes for the saturation. The figure's reflection is messed up.

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    Thanks DPFX, it's not supposed to be that saturated, something happened with the compression of the file and it wound up like that. Before that, it was turning up in a grey-scale negative... But I think you are right about the values. The reflection of the figure is due to my horrid Photoshop skills. I have no excuse -_-'

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    Rather than 'it's boring cause it's central' I was hoping I could get some advice on how to make it interesting as well as being told why it's not. Can anyone help?

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