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    palam – Composition 1.1

    Hi everyone. This is my thirst study.
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    I spent about 1 hrs on this.
    I like the atmosphere of the picture.
    I like the rhythm, of paintings and chairs on the background and checkerboard floor.
    Beautiful contrast - dark clothes and bright faces.

    Sorry for my awful English.

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    I spent about 1 hrs on this.
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    I spent about 40 min on this.
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    I spent about 1 hrs on this.
    I like how separate foreground from background.
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    Rhythm
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    Emphasis
    I'm not sure where the emphasis is first.
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    Contimuity
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    Economy.
    In shadows and little bit on the background.
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    rhythm and emphasis
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    continuity and economy (example)
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    rhythm and emphasis
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    Great stuff! keep going
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    These are excellent. You are off to a great start and it is going to be interesting to see where this thread goes. Great choices of paintings too.

    with that said, keep pushing for more accurate edge work and surface. The atmosphere will improve if so. You are getting 99 percent there though and are on track for where I hope to see people reaching with these studies. Just keep pushing for more and more accuracy in shapes, values and edges (and surface).

    Excellent job on the analysis too. The diagrams are helpful to seeing what you are noticing. Thanks.

    Keep up the great work.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Jason Manley View Post
    These are excellent. You are off to a great start and it is going to be interesting to see where this thread goes. Great choices of paintings too.

    with that said, keep pushing for more accurate edge work and surface. The atmosphere will improve if so. You are getting 99 percent there though and are on track for where I hope to see people reaching with these studies. Just keep pushing for more and more accuracy in shapes, values and edges (and surface).

    Excellent job on the analysis too. The diagrams are helpful to seeing what you are noticing. Thanks.

    Keep up the great work.


    JM
    Thanks for the advice. I'll try. But, more accurate edge work and surface is complicated because resolution too small. But as i said, i'll try. Thank you again

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    I understand composition more, thanks to this thread.
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    You should see ZeCarnevilCat's thread, he doing interesting composition researching

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