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The composition is the main problem. It looks like you've just thrown as many elements as possible without really knowing what you were aiming for.
The orc anatomy could use a bit of work, values could be worked on a bit more, especially to give more 'readable' volumes...
Oh and it's better if the orc actually looks at the elf.