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    Starship redux



    Thanks to whomever referred me to Photobucket, helps a lot. Anyways, painted in Photoshop CS for a class project. C&C welcome and appreciated, thanks!

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    This is really good.

    The colours are what stands out in my opinion. I especially like the way you've kept it simple, yet it looks so effective.

    It does look slightly blurry however, but this also adds to the effect, and it's space, so that's what you'd expect!

    How long did it take you to do this? I'd be surprised if you don't get a high mark in your class. Well done.

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    that looks much better

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    Thanks, I sort of just bang it out in small chunks. I'd say over the last 3 days I've spent about 5 hours on it. The teacher is really good, heh.

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    The teacher liked the image, but suggested that the moon might be a tad too large for the composition, so I decreased it's size. Give me your opinion, thanks!

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    Glad to see its workin for ya. now we can all see you great works

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    One last try to get a crit on this, and then I'll let it die.

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    i love it. and mostly because of its simplicity. it somehow reminds me of a still frame of a japanese animation sci-fi film more than a concept-art piece.
    i can almost see the whole scene with ship moving and the dust curling up and to the sides as it dissapears.

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    Looks great.

    The smaller moon helps alot. Before it looked like the moon was going to crush the ship between it and the edge of the work.
    I was going to suggest adding some darker tones into the clouds, but I think that it is fine. Just a suggestion.

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