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    Jordz Sketchbook - Want to improve

    Hi after lurking for awhile i'm finally doing a sketchbook.
    Heres some work i've already done:
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    Did a quick male anatomy study:
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    A small still life of my coffe table
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    Just a quick 20 min bird sketch
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    Been busy but finding time, I just did a quick lighting study:
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    Looking good keep asking the questions, how do push X(gesture,form, drama) using the fundamentals like perspective, light on form, and the why questions as well (why doesn't the image 'read' the way i want (e.g. composition).
    Hope this thread never stops on growing, be very very patient, study and practice lots, never give up!

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    Thank you for your feedback Call0ps.
    Here is just some quick gesture drawings before work:
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    Decided to practice faces, mainly looking at getting the value right in the face. I also wanted to practice hair. I attempted to do a painting of Kate Beckinsale.:
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    Did some more gesture sketches before work:
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    Just a study
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    Bought myself a copy of 'Anatomy for the Artist' really nice book. Did a study of one of the images inside:
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    I decided to do a desert environment piece. I wanted to mainly play with depth.
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    Life Drawing Class started yesterday.
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    Some More life drawing, also did some charcoal silhouette drawing towards the end.
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    More Anatomy studies, I need to work on a major weakness the head.
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    Some leg studies.
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    Quick 40 minutes sumo study
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    Tried to paint an archer, I think the hair needs a little work.
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    Been busy with Uni but did this quickly as ive managed to get my pre order for majoras mask
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    I think I did something wrong because some of my posts have disappeared. Ill post what I did. These images are from a couple of weeks ago:
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    Some more I did, just some quick male torso studies:
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    My most recent just a study of female anatomy, not too pleased with it:
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    Your pencil shading is very nice, and you have a very distinct line quality, and it looks like you're making great improvements in your understanding of anatomy! Something I would suggest is lots of hand studies... It seems like you fall into the habit of giving people hands that are just a bit too small, as many do. Also, another thing I see is that in your digital studies, you seem to be very tentative in using very dark values? This is also a common mistake, where people are a little worried about going too dark, and end up making pictures that don't have strong value contrast, ending up looking a bit flatter than they intended. I'd recommend doing some more basic lighting studies with your digital art.
    Very good start though! Lots of good progress, keep it up!

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    Thanks for your feedback Goldenveined it's much appreciated. I do need to some hand studies because I struggle with them same with the head.

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    Good sketchbook so far. It looks like you have a solid knowledge of anatomy; I would focus on form and structure to make sure that knowledge can be shown in the best way possible. Always keep in mind the largest structures of the head, ribcage and pelvis. Everything else should more or less fit on top of or into those. Good work though.

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    Thanks for you feedback too Hitchins. Decided to do a couple of hand studies as well as arm studies.
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