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    Hi concept art!!!!I come from a graffiti background where everything i learned was self taught. I want to be more than just a graffiti artist though, I want to push my work. So i can eventually become precise and professional.

    What Category or Industry if any?, do you think my work falls under?

    Drop some feedbakc if you have a chance, thanks for watching.


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    Here is one of Spawn teleporting to hell, or maybe Starbucks? who knows.
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    These are both really good. The second one is especially good, specifically the color and texture. The only criticism would be that the figure is slightly off center, but not far enough off center to really look intentional. Otherwise, good job!

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    Thanks for the feedback Redflags. I see what you mean with the spawn image. Unfortunately I drew it like that and didn't notice it was off center till i was done with the digital editing. I figured it was a good edit so decided to upload it. thanks for the critique, i'll see if I can fix that spawn piece and upload a better version thanks again!

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    The posing in both of these is very static and more than a bit awkward. In fact, neither actually look like they're doing anything, just being displayed against a surface with a few effects applied to them.

    Do you do much in the line of gesture studies? If not, that would help a lot, as would making a conscious effort to have overlapping elements, 3/4 views where possible, and background elements.

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    Mixed Media;Ink, Acrylic and grape flavored,cool-aid on white canvas

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    here is a ink and acrylic painting i did on brown board paper.
    Just getting my psychedelic fix really right quick with this one hope you enjoy

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