I am no expert, I am only here because no one is helping you.
try to get smoother value transitions. water color might be too hard to start with? donno.
when applying, lay down the shadow areas with a light color. be confident and clear, about where the light is coming from and where the high lights are.
here are some paint overs.
I am still a student so yeah
hope this helps
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