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    Teen Challenge 215: Qiu Jin

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    Don't tell me women are not the stuff of heroes,
    I alone rode over the East Sea's winds for ten thousand leagues.
    My poetic thoughts ever expand, like a sail between ocean and heaven.
    I dreamed of your three islands, all gems, all dazzling with moonlight.
    I grieve to think of the bronze camels, guardians of China, lost in thorns.
    Ashamed, I have done nothing; not one victory to my name.
    I simply make my war horse sweat. Grieving over my native land
    hurts my heart. So tell me; how can I spend these days here?
    A guest enjoying your spring winds?

    Poem by Qiu Jin. Translated by Zachary Jean Chartkoff.

    Task:
    Qiu Jin(1875-1907) was a Chinese revolutionary, feminist and writer. During her life she spoke out for women's rights, such as the freedom to marry, freedom of education, and the ending of the practice of foot binding. She was the head of the Datong school in Shaoxing. This school was officially used for the education of sport teachers, but was in secret a school for the military training of revolutionaries. After a failed uprising in 1907 against the Qing Dynasty she was caught and executed.

    The task is to draw/paint Qiu Jin. Keep in mind the historical context. You are allowed to draw just the character but of course if you feel like going more illustrative (put her in a setting) I'm not going to stop you.

    Deadline:
    Sunday 29 June at midnight(gmt).

    Don't forget to crit each other and help each other out. I accept both traditional and digital work, but make sure that scans and photos of traditional work are crisp and clean.

    Good luck!
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    Good stuff

    I've been doing some exploration, I still have to practice a lot of anatomy. I drew a nude figure and layed some clothes on top for now, planning to do a Mucha-ish painting as my end goal.
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    Any help/critique is very welcome
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    So I put the lines on multiply and put some colors underneath, then started rendering on top. Any suggestions for the face and body anatomy would be awesome, it's something that I have trouble with all the time.

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    I'm not going to post my work here because it's almost complete, anyway if I can say something about your drawing it's that her calves seem too much big (IMHO) for a female figure. See you at the finals.
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    Hey man, always post your work here even if it's almost finished. There's no reason not to, and you'll always miss flaws in your own work. (which is why I participate in these challenges in the first place) It's not a competition...

    On the calves; you're absolutely right, I'll fix them. Thanks!

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    You are totally right but I have already finished my work. I'll make sure of posting my W.I.P. during the next challange.
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    Well, suit yourself. I recall there being a rule in past challenges where you had to post at least some wips of your work as you were working, maybe we should reinstall that?


    Anyway, here's my progress:
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    Would love to hear some critique
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    Hi beautiful artists of CA! This is my first teen challenge as well as CA post XD I lurk loads.(I'm 15; eligible)Name:  Qiu Jin.jpg
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    I'm just going to post one WIP for now, and some others later.

    I swear I really wish Qiu Jin was japanese so I can paint the red circle thing.
    Many more changes to come, I'll probably illustrate books and school things in the background. Maybe even some veils. I'm very ambitious woops XD
    Correct thread now~
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    Hi Aimee, welcome!

    You're ambitious, don't let it discourage you
    I like your entry so far. As far as feedback goes; the neck is very thick, and her eyes and brows seem to be asymetrical. Not impossible, but not great-looking either. Also, the shape of her hairdo is weird I think. Overall a strong start, the head looks pretty ok and I like the clothes.

    Good luck!
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    Thank you so much for your critique! Really helpful!
    I will most definitely take those into consideration.
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    First post here, yay!
    This is my WIP, I still have loads to do, especially adding more shadows and contrast to the face and folds to the cape
    Any critiques would be appreciated
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    WIP 2
    not much change, I had grown busy with some outside work but heres some changes. Not much but oh well a WIP is a WIP
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    nice to see this place is still active, it's been a while since I've visited. Right now I still can't compete with you guys just yet. :/ still freelancing with this person, so yeah got my hands busy but wish you guys have fun doing these contests.
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