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    Hello again guys! This is a early rough ninja dude i have been playing around with for a while and need help and input into design ideas that you think i could incorporate. And any early issues that might plague me later on! Thanks.

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    You give me a clear silhouette, but the details are hard to read (okay, it is an early rough ninja dude, so you can fix this later). I would crop this differently, with more space on his right, and less on his left side. Be sure you think the lighting through, as I cannot really discern light or shadow...

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    I am not too concerned about lighting its not quite there but more on the design side like his weapons or things i could put on his clothes etc. But thanks for the framing tip.

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    Is there anything wrong with this?

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    Learn to sharpen your edges where you want us to focus and lose them elsewhere. Try a few Master Studies to learn that in quick form.

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    Playing with colours and light with this one. Going to render it and finish but before I do... anything wrong with the lighting or anything?

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