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    train or GI-JOE box art

    ...and it started out so promising. I'm not sure why but the thing looks like its from a Toy. suggestions?

    train or GI-JOE box art


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    needs a nice cobra emblem on it.
    Tira me a las aranas.

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    Maybe if you'd difine the details on the train some it wouldn't look so blury. All and all pretty cool though!
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    Very nice beginning to the piece, but it lacks enough definition to really stand out. The colors are very good, but small vignettes of detail would complement them nicely. The scratchy lines don't do very much to define shape.

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