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    Hi again XD looking for feedback

    Hello I'm looking for some feedbacks on my anatomy study and finished drawing. I'm new to digital art and I guess art as a whole (I took 3 art classes, figure drawing, intro to the drawing and advanced drawing)

    Anyway here they are

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    I want to improve as fast as I humanly can, my goal is do concept art and character design in the near future.

    Thank you

    P.S. if theres any moderators here can you delete my previous thread that bugged out? Thank you

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    I suggest you start studying gesture, for instance through Loomis mannikin, and study from life as much as you can. I like your black widow, but the posing/staging is awkward, with that hand growing from her head. Always keep an eye on the silhouette, and make sure it is readable!

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    Hmm okay, unfortunately I don't have access to live models. But I will do as much as I can

    Oh also, are you suggesting me to study gesture/loomis mannikin to get a better sense of the proportion or the essence of the models? Just want to clarify that XD

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    Quote Originally Posted by WenDu View Post
    Hmm okay, unfortunately I don't have access to live models. But I will do as much as I can
    With studying from life I mean studying people around you, on the street, in the mall, gym, school, whatever...

    Oh also, are you suggesting me to study gesture/loomis mannikin to get a better sense of the proportion or the essence of the models? Just want to clarify that XD
    I suggest you study gesture as a shorthand to jot down poses from life...

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    ah okay, thanks.

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    not gesture, but more studies, critiques welcome.

    Trying to do more gesture, but I often find my gestures to be lacking :/

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    Quote Originally Posted by WenDu View Post
    Trying to do more gesture, but I often find my gestures to be lacking :/
    Don't let this discourage you! Gesture is hard, takes a lot of practice, doesn't usually look pretty, but, in my opinion, it is essential!

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    Thanks man, I will try more gestures!

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    Just did this, there's something off about the head, but no reference photo to reference from

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    Thanks Benedikt, will keep that in mind XD

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    I think I fixed her head, what do you guys think? I know the color is bad, but I don't have any coloring background unfortunately...

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    this is my two cents; I think her face is a bit small compared to the actual head. On top of that, her shoulders are kind of large, almost masculine. Her hips/lower torso are kind of thin compared to her upper body in general. Also the general foreshortening on the right leg (her left leg) isn't all that believable and could use some work. Thats just about the best I can offer without being a total asshole about this.

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