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    Exclamation Critique on House Paintings

    I've been painting for a week and I just would like some critiques on my work.

    Please be strict and I'm open to any suggestions!





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    You need to focus on perspective and structure. The perspective and shapes of your houses are often weak, though your brush strokes often are a bit clumsy.

    What I'd recommend doing is getting some book on perspective and structural drawing (Norling for example) and learn how to build proper perspective. Then if you like copying from life, get some ruler and a pencil, and go draw houses that way. You will have to pay special care to perspective and making sure the structure is correct. There's also a problem with lighting but I think the priority should be put on the structure for now.

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