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    Very nice start to this assignment. Leonardo was famous for his sfumato, tonal gradation/atmosphere. The face in yours could benefit from a second look in that regard. Gradation and edge accuracy is super important. You did it on the arm quite well...just need to apply the same thing to the face.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jason Manley View Post
    Very nice start to this assignment. Leonardo was famous for his sfumato, tonal gradation/atmosphere. The face in yours could benefit from a second look in that regard. Gradation and edge accuracy is super important. You did it on the arm quite well...just need to apply the same thing to the face.

    Keep up the great work.


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    awesome work. it looks like the light could be a little stronger on the face and weasel's head. Be sure you are getting the full value range. this one is much improved though. great job.


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    thank u jason.
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