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June 4th, 2014 #1
Girl with sword
i need help for that piece.
the face feel wrong - i dont why.
i really appreciated every kind of advice.
Thank you for taking your time
Last edited by Zauselbart; June 6th, 2014 at 06:40 AM.
Hide this ad by registering as a memberJune 4th, 2014 #2
That aint a bad effort - the things that could be improved are pretty small as opposed to big glaring problems.
The main thing I noticed was that she has a very masculine face - which is unappealing for a woman. So I worked on softening her really strong eyebrows and bringing colour to her nose and cheeks (this is usual with caucasian women) - I tweaked small things like the chin shape (too hard and angular atm) - and I also corrected small proportional issues with the ears etc...
Looking at the rest of the unfinished painting I would question your methodology - do you have an underlying piece of line work to define the structure? It looks like you're just whacking blobs of paint on and then refining them. This is definitely the harder way to do thingsSKETCHBOOK / PORTFOLIO / ARTLORDS / ART STATION / DEVIANT ART / FACEBOOK
Oh and if you want to watch me paint live I recently got introduced to this thing called picarto TV... It's nice to do art and share it - if you have any questions it's great to talk too! I'm painting pretty much 12 hours a day so you'll most likely find me - unless I'm eating
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June 6th, 2014 #3
So many thanks for your advices - its was a huge help!
The face isnt finished yet but now i like it a bit more.
Yes i have no underlying drawing - i work both ways but usually i do the drawing analog. Lines are my weak spot.
This piece started as a doodle and grow to a illustration - thats why it is so messy
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