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    Critique for Warrior piece

    What can I improve in this piece (*not done by myself--a friend--but posted with permission of the artist)?

    Critique for Warrior piece


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    The composition I'd say. It looks central and flat, and the character is leading us to nothing.

    Also the values and highlights are all over the place. Define a light source and stick to it.

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